dragon999965's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Faction]

lol

it said strike, but strike means that you missed, it should say home run

[Worm's Shooter]

...

Just your average side-scrolling tracked shooter, with a lack of the good sfx, music, grafix, or good points as in upgrades, etc...

[Little Indian Warrior]

Terrible all around.

The music was too repetitive and soft, SFX was to loud in comparison. The lighting was usually bad, shadows were not synced with the objects. Worst of all: GRAMMER!!! Have someone proof read your text before you submit it, to an average developer this would be rather embarasing. A misspelling here and there is ok, not good, but ok. Inproper usage of all types of gramatical rules is not. The game also didn't grab a person's attension, by the 2nd or 3rd mission the player is waiting for the game to end so that they could move on to something more entertaining. The grammer really needs work, BADLY. No offense but it's as if you asked a 3rd grader what the text should be.

[Stay Alive: Episode 1]

Good!

Pretty good, but it's not done, zombies walking though walls, attacking when out of range and lack of health bar for your own person, also put contact points so we know they are hit, a health bar would be nice too, and knock-back.

[Crush the Castle: PP]

Awesome!

Nice game, it even puts people in position to make professional looking levels (http://armorgames.com/yJGN)

[Newgrounds Rumble]

Gratz!

You have invented Super Smash Bros. : Newgrounds, keep up the good work.

[Exploit]

YUM!!!

THE PERSIMMONS ARE EXCELLENT!!! And the game was awesome. I logged in just to review and add to favs. The grammer could use some work, every now and then I got a little confused with the perspective of the text (I think it was the newspaper articles but I'm not sure). Anyway with that aside this still deserves a 5/5 10/10.

[sonic tournament ep1]

Laggy

It was pretty good but the lag on supersonicstrike was way to bad.

[Challenge]

Exellent!

You should totally make this online multiplayer. Then you get your 10th star.

[Woodbox Marble Lines]

Good game!

Just a little too dificult!